|Who's Your Daddy?!? Kane is your daddy!|
Ownage man. Great job.
|God I love it!|
I can't wait for part 5!
|Nice. I like the random Madeline L'Engle reference.|
Biggest problem: Gerard takes the gun from Jon then throws it away. A couple lines later, Jon drops the gun that he no longer has. Very bad.
I like how you manage to maintain an air of mystery about all this. Kind of like the X-files, back when it was good. Of course if you go another two months without any resolution I'll start getting irritated. :=)
|Your pic that says Cit-Kane is the final boss from "Crono Trigger" (That game rules all) |
|ur final picture is great.|
chrono trigger was my most enjoyable rpg ever,
even if ff3 was better gamewise.
|Wow, you wrote chess battlereports! Cool idea.|
I also think that you're recycling too much. When the magician stumbled like that, I thought, "Hmm, that's like the submersile technician. And the spaceship technician. And the reporter. And practically everyone who's not Gerard..."
Okay, I finally had to read this series. (since I glanced over this one and thought, 'wtf is going on?'. and I didn't want to have to start reading when you had the 10th installment out)
I can't wait until the next installment. I rarely say that about a fanfic. ;)
|Another good one, vincible doesn't know what he's talkin about ;[ |
|put more into each segment ;[. this one didnt answer nearly enough questions. I MUST KNOW!!! |
|When does part 5 come :D |
|MAD END PIC |
|Thanks all for your comments.|
#4: I'll correct that sometime later today =p
|Great fanfic as usual, itz not as good as the first few though, the suspense wasnt as good. Notice the word as. It was still really good. |
|I like your story, Kane.. ownage.|
BTW, Lavos's final form is a BITCH to kill (last pic)
Even if I totally own at CT, it was hard as hell.
|Lavos is so powerful, it's almost unfair. But I kicked his ass in the end o_O |
|Dammit I wish I could rate an 8.5, this was very good :D. Plz INCLUDE THAT MOOSE HUNT THO ;( |
|I don't think a moose hunt will happen, as the plot is headed nowhere near Canada. Sorry =[ |
|Wow... everyone likes it.|
Ima gonna start readin' this.
|YESSSS I got the front page hookup again!|
I WUB YOU MARK4 (or JV, or Fox1, or YRM... If it was YRM, he should stop fooling with the front page and WRITE SOME DAMN REPORTS T.T)
|dude, I even signed the post |
|wow, hak |
|What can I say, I enjoy this series and have been hooked for a while. Pls write more SOON! Else you'll force me to unleash my sarcasm on you. OoooOOooo Scary O.o |